How interesting...even though our poems have the same name...yours is much stronger emotionally and depicts a beautiful picture beyond compare. Excellent work...this piece definately needs to be praised some more!

Ohh my word, I can't believe this only has one review, one, one! Aye, I know why people haven't reviewed this amazing poem, people are just stunned by the sheer brilliance and talent in it that they don't know what to say! I love all your descriptive words, the drowning, soaring, twisting, turning... it's such a magnificently visual poem and arghh so wonderful _

WOW! That is seriously amazing! Well Done!