very dark. very interesting. even though the rhythm is a bit off, it still sounds good. i love depressing, dark poetry. :-)

i like these lines:

I won't cut for you or your words

I won't let myself grab that sharp edge

*MLP*

Yes! Call me crazy or annoying or a religious freak, I don't care, but I loved this poem because you were standing up! Saying no to the knife! Great uplifting stuff! All your work is excellent, I don't know what else to say. You're on my alert list, fav's author, yet that's not enough. Great work!

This was cool

I like your stuff!

I like that this person (maybe you) has a really strong character and that they wont let the other person get the better of them!

Thanks for reviewin my stuff.

:-)

hi...u just reviewed my poem so i decided to see some of ur work..this poem was great...dark n just a lil bit devious...i love the ending of it especially...i no wat u mean about hating people...im glad u liked my poem...ill read some more of ur stuff...n if u get a chance read some of my stuff...i have a short story called pickin up the pieces..about trying 2 put ur life back 2gether...thanks!

Icicle