it's really good the way you've written it. really easy to understand and a great storyline and great characters, yay!

A very recognizable state of affairs when it comes to the first day of school. The friendly anxiety hanging around a bunch of high school kids which makes you want to close your eyes and remember the atmosphere on the first day of school. Very rare, but the way it should be for everyone.

i just read your whole first story and i really really liked it good job

Woah! I loved the writing, the emotions and even the unique personalities and no-cliche characters! This was great, and I can't wait to read the rest of the series! Good job, this is going to my favorites!

All your characters make me happy. They're so funny and have their own personalites. I like their names to, I really like the name Morgan for a guy.

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I loved this story! It gave me so many laughs while reading it especially about the part where Gar dresses as a girl. I am happy I found this story, and I hope you will read mine. Although my disk with all my stories was erased so now I have to retype all of them even though they will be different.

hey you don't have to review my stuff, but it wasn't cheesy at all the ending i mean. it was uncontional love as you said. well keep writing the series. it's funny and great.

VERY VERY GOOD! I loved it and cant wait to read the sequels

Such a good story, keep up the good work!

WHOOT! i love this, i really do, and what even more amzing, is how many stories you've written, its TOATLY ... amazing, i said that befoe, right?

anyway, just want you to now, thanks to you, i'am not gonna be helplessly board for a LONG time.

P.S. i now lots of people want to know who they're fav, charecters is, by far, i love Garland! lol, it's scary though you think that might be a little out-of-the0ordaniry, how many times i've seen a guy in his dress *shuder* i don't have enough fingers to count...

keep it up, i'll b watching...

YEA THAT ROCKS!

THIS ROCKS!

WUTEV!

lol

LeeAnne Wolfe...wow, I've seen stories where the first name matches someone I know, and the last name, but not both together. Pretty cool! I like this one so far...so I'll get on to the next chapter!

Okay, this Chapter 1 title is a total lie, I've read the entire thing, I'm just now coming back to review on it.

Overall, I thought it was very nicely done, the writing was good. Just a few things I have to say and I hope that you will recieve them in the spirit they are given.

First, though I like all of the characters, it seemed to me like their coming together was a little /too/ perfect. They all just seem to click right away and though I know that happens a lot, it seems very improbable to happen to eight people.

Second, your characterization was good overall, but a comment on that. They were all fairly close to each other. I mean they all were fairly extroverted and willing to talk to someone they didn't even know. Twice. Seemed a little unrealistic to me. Though their personalities were different in some ways, it also was like they were all the same sometimes.

I think that's all I have for you right now, critique wise. Now I can say what I liked.

The romance-type thing you had going on was cute in a middle-school kind of way and you portrayed that very well, I had no problems invisioning them at my old school.

The humour had me busting at the seams a lot of the time; you have a gift for that, use it well.

My favourite character without a doubt is Sasha because he reminds me slightly of myself, though, funny thing is, they all do in some way or another. Another good point in this.

I will be reading the second installment shortly and you will hear from me again once I finish.

~MP

Wow! I really love this story! You have great writing style, and it makes me REALLY wanna keep reading! I'm not a professional or anything... but that seems like publish-able (