hey this is great, it's like don't listen to what others say to put you down, only you can do that, way to fly, nice poem

You wrote that yourself nice. It's short to the point and has a great message.

*Applauds* This is brilliant! Stunning in its simplicity and so true. Really inspirational, great job!

Wow...It's so simple, yet with all those lovely hidden complxities that make a poem *mean* something. I really like it.

Hey i like this one, too, I'm adding this to my fave stories list, even tho its a bit short

Nice. Very inspiring for the rebel in all of us.

This is an awesome poem!

*hands you cookies*

if I was loggedin, this would definetly be a favorite! It's so well written, though only 4 lines.

Thanxs for reviewing my story The Love Of One- i really value your opinions. As for this i think this is very good- you could add to it...more! i like this- i guess i always wanted to fly- thanxs agen-

BlueFire42

So simple, yet powerful in it's meaning. to thepoint; it's short and sweet:). Excelent poetry!

cool...great job

I love the message the poem sends. The imagery is wonderful, especially the last line. Beautiful...

Short. Sweet. To the point... Just like this review! hehe. Well done. Good one!

Interesting...thanx for your review. I think my poem wasn't quite right...but i dunno. Anyway...this poem may be short, but I think that it actually has lots of meaning! Keep writing!

Simplistic, yet meaningful. Good work.

Lucky