Great poem, sad concept, though well-portrayed.

Hi,

I think that's it never to late to makes dreams come true. Just saying or changing one thing can mean so much for one person. It was a sad poem but wirtten well. I like the repeating of the lines.

Thanks for sharing :)

aw :( I know the feeling too much, especially right now, still don't have a job and my dreams still haven't taken off like I thought they would. :( Very good. but so sad. keep writing