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AmyLeeAndStephenieMeyerAreLove 2007-02-25 . chapter 1
I read the title, I read the summary, and yet for some reason as I read the story, I was not thinking about what I knew was coming. So it caught me off-guard and creeped me out. You are decidedly a brilliant writer (I don't think I have to say that in every review I submit) and this was a good example of that. Short but enjoyable...and disturbing. To the undisturbed!

~Lyn~
CandyCaneCarnage 2004-09-01 . chapter 1
I love this! It's disturbing and funny, a perfect combination. You're a great writer.
Agathy 2004-03-28 . chapter 1
Yay, I found this story! Okay, first of all, I saw it on S.T.Y.A.'s profile last night/this morning and the summary intrigued me, but I didn't read it because...because, well, I figured it'd be best to read a Horror story in the morning. It's really good, too...short, disturbing, and slightly funny. I was halfway expecting one of them to slaughter and devour each other at the end, but that would have been a bit melodramatic. Nice title, too, by the way. Keep writing!
Ade 2003-11-17 . chapter 1
Hooray for cannibalism! Hee, I like this! But the narrator could be fleshed out (ha) a bit more. We don't get much info about him/her/it/whatever.
delighted delirium 2003-10-24 . chapter 1
A bit sick when you think about it, but written in such a detailed and lighthearted way that is seems quite natural and rational.
I've said it before and I'll say it again: You rule.
how do you delete accounts 2003-10-04 . chapter 1
Whoa..that's kinda gross. Obviously. But...nice description. I liked the way you played the story out, and the details you gave to the example of Harold Deitz. But you might have put a little more depth into Anna and the narrator's relationship; it didn't say much about how she was special. What did she do that was different from any other woman? (Other than eating people.) But otherwise, it was a good story, if a little unsettling. I wouldn't want to be reading it while I was eating.
Ciara Blaze 2003-10-02 . chapter 1
wow... interesting twist. o_O very interesting twist... heh heh... great work too. :D
restless-wandering 2003-09-30 . chapter 1
o... cannibals... interesting... Been watching Hannibal have we? m... brain...
Law Breaker 2003-09-26 . chapter 1
Bravo! But still - what are they? It's good and all - but we don't know what the hell they are.
Jennifer 2003-09-17 . chapter 1
You've done it again. You've managed to managed to make a completly disturbing situation seem perfectly rational. I really like this one.
saintchris 2003-09-17 . chapter 1
Great story, but the title and summary give away the story a bit. Maybe it should be left to the reader to work out.

I think it is Poppy Z Brite who writes stories like this, possibly also Christopher Fowler. If you haven't already, check out some of their short stories.

I will be checking out more of your stories when I get a bit more time.
CLRhodes 2003-09-16 . chapter 1
The story is good, but I really think this isn't one of your best. it's lacking suspence. Though it is nice.

C.
Froberg 2003-09-16 . chapter 1
That was... great. Formatting, paragraphing, gramar... Damn, I can't find anything wrong anywhere! That kinda makes this review worthless doesn't it?
Gracen Poe 2003-09-15 . chapter 1
Good story...nice and twisted
Evangeline 2003-09-15 . chapter 1
You are an amazing author!
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