Awesome story, luv.

I also happen to be an English girl living in America, so I find it so true. Keep up the good work!

That's such a sweet story! I love your details, metaphors, and similies! This is the sort of thing an English teacher would use as an example of incredible writing.

wow! *stares at computer screen in awe and jelousy*
Why can't I write descriptive pieces like you...?
That was really good, and really descriptive. I loved it so much!