hurm~~where is the sequel?..please tell me there is a sequel?..coz im like totally not going to be satisfied with a no sequel story..!,,please tell me..please..im desperate here!!...your story is so god...i wanted more!

*snicker* that was good though I'm disappointed not to see the second arc up yet. :) it was good though.

:) Wow. this is very good!

Hm. interesting, but I like it.

I really enjoyed your story. See ya around!

o, fantastic, I held my breath through the entire piece...I can't wait for the second story...wish I could write as good as you do...keep up the great work!

that was absolutely brilliant. you really deserve more reviews. haha... so much for a constructive comment...

*fans self* A magnificent story! Better than some published work I've seen out there, definitely!

I particularly liked how you chose to write from Demian's perspective. It's refreshing. All too often, writers choose the protangonist as the one the story revolves around; the one with the most angst. But choosing to write from Demian's POV reveals Andrys' story one tantilizing detail at a time.

I will definitely be on the lookout for Arc Two!

I have just found this story and it is wonderful! I can't wait for "Arc Two - Black Mask". I hope you find the time to work on the sequel soon.

wow. nice. ^^ it really does go with the story and we get a bit of insight from andrys. it was a wonderful story that i enjoyed. there will be more right? i'm going back to your profile to check now. ^^;

*snickers* he got a kiss from alex. lol. and yay. ^^ the whole making love thing went well until they stormed in... *bonks francis* you ruined the post making love cuddling bit!

wow... that all happened a lot sooner and better than anticipated... though i'm glad... i really can't stand tension... i get really bitchy afterwards. ^^; okies, next chapter!

sappy and cliche but the dead don't truely die if they are not forgotten. it would be nice if they were ALIVE. but death's a part of life... and i hate it sometimes because it means parting with people you care about. good job demian on keeping control. ^_^ let andrys set the pace or something bad will probably happen.

yay! progress~ =)

^_^ that was nice. being careful is a good idea ... i wonder if andrys will ever be healed? *sighs* rape is one of the worst things you can do to a person. i think it's worse than death.