I liked this story. It would be even better with more plot and character development. Otherwise, very good job!

This was an enjoyable story. The idea is intriguing... I could see it being a funny movie. A little more complication in the storyline would be needed to make it even better.

I liked the story a lot. Very interesting plot.

Oh my...

It was very amusing, though. perhaps you could consider creating abit more of an ending, as you just kind of left us hanging there, but otherwise it was very good. Yay!

And she wonders why her teacher doesn't like her story...

this is a very interesting story. I like and boy do i wish this could happen to me. it would be awsome to have something like this happen to me...

I like the story.