This is definitely an interesting story, but I must say that I find my attention captured mainly by the Samuel/Jonathan part of the saga, rather than the angel gathering that is occuring right now. The writing style is awkward, especially since the author attempts to add some little emotional background to every other line, which really bogs the chapter down. Rishta, frankly, with all her unnecessary introspection, is annoying. The story is 46 chapters long-why stress her emotional status in one chapter? Uh . . . sorry for leaving a review longer than Les Miserables, and don't think this is a flame-it's not! The plot is awesome and its amazing that you've managed to conceive and carry it out. I have much respect for ya'all, so I'm hoping you won't take this the wrong way . . .

I just finished reading the whole thing, and I have one thing to say...DAMN! That was absolutly, positivly brilliant!

By the way, just an FYI. You spelled fourteen wrong.

Wow, very… interesting to put it plainly. This is very well done. I’d like to invite you to a writing forum. I hope you enjoy the community and share some of your interesting works.
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O! This looks good D Morris seems a bit egotistical though D I hope thats intentional ;)
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I am at Chapter 2 so far and I'm really into it. The whole Samael and Johnathan situation really cracks me up. I hope that I can see more of it, but then again I haven't finished reading.

I am at Chapter 2 so far and I'm really into it. The whole Samael and Johnathan situation really cracks me up. I hope that I can see more of it, but then again I haven't finished reading.