This story is amazing! The characters are real, the storlyine solid and engaging. I can't wait for more, you must write more! Finish it, publish it, and I'll buy it. hehe... ah, I love this story.

This story is amazing, it seems you have it all planned out and it is very interesting.

Nice, very interesting concept! I'm going to have to read the rest of this one! :D

She snarled at Raheanae and lashed out with a paw, but missed by a long shot. “Careful where you’re sticking those claws.”
"Careful..." should be on a new line

Great chapter, i think you could strengthen the ending, but its still good!

This is a great story, I can't see why you havent gotten any reviews! Please continue, it really has a great, and origional, plot