aw, very good, very emotional, i can imagine how that would feel, especially if u grew up in the house. But its change, and u gotta move on. good poem. Twilight

I can't read enough of your stuff! It's just absolutely beautiful! I've never experienced this but after reading it I don't want to. Absolutely marvelous.

This...is downright beautiful. It captures all the memories one acquires in their house, and their loss as the cage of their memories is destroyed. Bravo!

great poem... would make a great poem.. I'm sorry this happened but your descriptions are excellent