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hidden_self 2005-02-12 . chapter 1
What you've written at the end makes sense. Dying would be meaningless. You're poems make a lot of sense to someone who is feeling the exact same way.
Damaged 2003-10-13 . chapter 1
^_^ Great poem. And depressing isn't bad, so don't feel the need to apologize for it. But, then again, what can I say? That's basically all I right. ^.^ Keep up the great work!
Morncreek 2003-09-21 . chapter 1
Words flow from my soul
A burbling, sometimes shaky stream
Of painful thoughts and lost dreams

This pain gives me my power in poetry
To write the litany of
Hurting, confusing, lonely words never spoken aloud

A gift to the world
Yet a curse to me

The sadness abates for a little time
But then must be expiated once more.

~

I wrote you a little poem so you'd know there's another who understands. Hang in there, Frozen Midnight. I would be very heartbroken if you died, because I love your writings and you as person. I think you should read "The Connection between All Writers" by Gamer GX. There is one paragraph that I believe will catch your eye...

Sending lots of love, Morncreek
xLecta 2003-09-16 . chapter 1
makes you think...like most of very WONDERFUL poems and stories. Like the little advice you put at the end and the poem is really true and a lot of people can relate to that, keep up the good work.
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