Oh, wow, this is so good! Poetry's tough...this is good...yup, that's it!

Kiara

Awesome, awesome, awesome... GREAT job on this. The atmosphere was innovative, and no less than terrific.

makes biblical stories worth while.

incredible! simply incredible! i am left in awe by the intensity of this piece... it's going into my faves.

Amazing! There is so much emotion in this ! Its so powerful, so compeling... Shocking, yet inspiring. And, in a way, beautiful. Truley breathtaking.

CoolBeans18s

Absolutely... shocking. I mean that in a good way. I had never thought about this story in quite that way before, having always heard of it as such an innocent child's tale. But that's how propaganda, even ancient and supposedly sacred propaganda, so often presents itself. This is how being "saved" on the arc would have been, wouldn't it? Wow.

Chillingly beautiful and clear.

awesome poem! well written, so much emotion, so powerful and inspiring, with some beautiful imagery and great word choice. nice job!

thanks for all your kind reviews. yeah, i'm not much of a sappy love poet. i rarely even write love poems. anyway, keep on writing!

That was extremely beautiful...bitter sweet madness, I guess we need some of that sometimes. The format is awesome and captures my attention the moment I lay my eye on it.

Wow. That was extremely powerful. The images of destruction were breathtaking. I loved how you played with different and opposite concepts. And I really liked the underlying bitterness.

Good work.

very cool poem! I'm not sure what the style is exactly, but it was very cool...kind of like all different forms of haiku! Very interesting!

Plus, it was a good poem even without the cool and unique style to it. Very good indeed.

write on!