you. need. more. panterness. because. i. miss. it. whore. please hurry and fix it! haha i love u!

Still good lol...i read this awhile ago and reviewed it 4 u then so u know wut i think but im nice so i do again...ch. 6? hurry...:)

O I LOVES! Awesome, plotline... Angsty goodness...
*sniffs the air* It's like drugs, only legal...

I still love the way you write crystal,
and I am going to send you the first chapter of one of my werecat stories...
I just started transfering it onto a disk last night. I Hope you like it, anyways; I hope you update this soon,
cause I love reading it!
Ashes Lady

omg i got halfway thru this chapter (4)and i swear ill finish it later but mi ear is killing me so i really cant concentrate ne more but from wut i read so far OMG i luv it! ill finish readin it 2nite lol! great job tho!

I wub it I wub it I WUB IT!
You knew that already, of course, but you reviewed mine, and now it's only right that I shower you with the same praise.
Love the concept too; sounds like it should be a movie. With... people.
And a paper mache duck. _
And. Blow...

yay, an update! lovely scene, kristen. i wish i had a dilapidated playground to call my own...

GOOD WORK! What can I say but well done! You've grasped your plot and concept with both hands and shook it out right for a reader!
nicely structured two thumbs up and an A!

Woohoo! Another great chapter. What I like about your writing style is that you create vivid pictures of your settings in my head, which makes the story much more enjoyable to read. Whenever I write, I always try to describe the settings and use imagery. What's different about your writing is that you accomplish all that in a few sentences...sometimes in a few words. And that's awesome! Can't wait for the rest :)

Wow Kristen! I think your story's awesome, what a great idea! I commend you for having the bravery to post an original idea online, you took a risk in doing so. I enjoy your characters, I like Derek the best. I dont know why...lol I just do. You've taken what sounded to me as a very simple idea and transformed it into a very developed story line. You're very creative and keep on writing!

PS if you don't know which lindsey this is, I think this'll help you out...CHICKEN! lol byez

Hey sweetie; still doing awesome! I should be done with the first chapter of mine soon, so get ready to critisize!

Keep writing! I'm gonna e-mail you tonight

Marah ;

very very good! i like it very much...keep writing...also would u mind if i borrow "Has your ego been getting bigger or is that just your head inflating?" in my lil fic? j/w...god story though.

Nicly done! _ It was well thought of and a nice flowing motion in it as well, great job! Keep it up!

*The Goddess of Night*

The story sounds *great* so far! Very different from your B/A series - it shows a commitment to creativity and excellence in writing that should serve you well in the future.

If anything, you might want to make sure that you have consistent punctuation throughout, but otherwise I think that it's just a terrific tale.

Keep up the great work! I am very proud of what you do!

hey, it's carly. great story so far. from now on i'll be watching for updates :)

you're such a great writer, keep it up!