perfect continuation- it adds the perfect hint of hope. again, the images are wonderful, and i can see the scene playing in my mind. very very good.

That was a nice resolution to your original poem... I liked all the vivid wording and imagry you used. The second to the last stanza was my favorite... I got a very serene feel after reading this. Keep it up!

very cool... i could picture the whole thing... its amazing

How do you do it? I am floored again. Partially because I couldn't write like you to save my life and mostly because you are an amazing writer! Splendid job!

~*~AbunaiChikara