|Reviews for text to text|
| Protege 11/14/03 . chapter 1
Yes, this is good.
I've never seen, nor contemplated a poem with this subject matter. Or metaphor... There are some cool lines in this..Odd lines..."Closelined across the words...and soul hung out to catch the color. I really liked this poem.
| aleppine 9/16/03 . chapter 1
This is really good. I love the way it seems to gush, partly due to the way you've broken down the line sin mid-sentence and partly because of the general lack of punctuation.
'... I lay out my heart on a string ...'
'... and soul hung out to catch the colour if only it would fall down to where I wait ...'
I also liked the unusual text theme ... the colours of it, the lines, the font type. Beautiful poem.