You like story songs, don't you? XDD You should, cause you're very good at them. ^_^ I especially like the last four lines, very effective.

Oh, I love the word usage in this! You really have to read into the lines to figure out whats going on, very Kyo-like. ^_^

I like the story setting of this one. It's very hard not to finish reading, kind of draws you in. I don't quite see this as a song though... Hm... =/ It feels like a poem to me. ^^;; But, I love it all the same. ^_^

Oh, I like, I like. XD Highly visual, dazed emotion, which is always the best kind. ^_^ The kind of emotion that is powerful alive yet dead and weak at the same time... Very good. ^^
(Thanks for your review of Family Tree by the way. ^_^ It doesn't really have anything to with sex for me at least. It's actually a very personal song for me, which is rare. ^^;; I meant for it to have a sexual meaning for other people though, just so it wasn't completely pointless to them. XD; ...And I'm in your profile? o.o *feels honored* XD)

oh... creepy...YEAH!

creative... really nice

I read the other two, and this one is b far the best. I really like the descriptive wrod you used, and the delusional state of the song character is interesting. I would love to hear the music for this... *is imagining crazy violins and guitar riffs... lol* Anyways, I like it. ^.^ (Sounds kinda like Kyo lyrics, if you know who he is. ^-^)

With Love,