Wow, this is incredibly intriguing. I just happen to be a music freak, so maybe I'm biased, but I already am interested. Keep writing. You may want to proofread your next chapter a little closer to avoid some simple spelling and grammatical errors, though.

"sanomi hele, MANILA KERANU, aliya irema nia lago ture madille..." seem familiar? if you know what I'm talking about, I'll just say that I LOVE THAT SONG!
and i also love your story, you can sure write :) please get in touch with me through e-mail or something if it's not a problem. Or you can review some of my own works...thanx

Wow. I can't imagine a world without music. I like this.