I feel the same way a lot of the time, I have written something like this called "The Disease",and other stuff like it. Great job! I also loved the rhyming in this too

Deeply insightful, with more than a dash of irony :P I like it.

It's so cool how we took the same sort of theme and interpreted it in different ways. (were you inspired by something Ronan said in the lesson one day? I was. ) And it's strange how we both end on the same note - it's the adults who are to blame.
We must think the same or something...?
You can't say my poem was better then yours! Every poem is special in its own way and this is great! Your rhymes are better than mine anyway, so there! ;P

Great job. Exellent, and true. _ I printed it off, and put it in front of my human studdies notebook. _

...That is why our kids are playing with these kind of things moderately, and trying to teach them to do things in a moderate way...Too much is never good!

Nice message and nice rhyming getting that flow, GOOD POEM!

Write on...