This is beautifully angst-filled, but sadly enough true. I know a friend of mine who is like this, and I have a feeling that she's going to push away love too. So sad, so true, so perfect.

Just thought I'd let you know, I made an account. :)
And.. I absolutely love this poem. It's very insightful and angsty. The ending fits it perfectly.

ooh... was it real? that'll be, so, i don't know, dreamy if it was ^^ one of the best, that's for sure! I likes! me puts on favs!!

Wow!
That was amazing! Honestly, one of the best poems I've ever read. Even better than some I've read by famous authors *y'know, some really aren't that great

But anyway, that poem was so moving! I love it! I can't express exactly how it's made me feel, just moved.
Keep it up!



ps. sorry for the late reviews but we've been installing broadband which took ages and with homework, etc...

Very angsty! If ur into this, have u ever watched the anime X by Clamp? Very angsty, or Ayashi no Ceres as well. But the most angst one I think is the Kenshin Rurouni, the Japanese version of how he became to be this hitokiri battousai. I call it the pre-Kenshin, (there's the Kenshin (Japanese) where it's more light hearted. the one i'm talking about is only four episodes long, but VERY, VERY, VERY, angsty and sad! I just watched it and it was the only anime, EVER, that I actually cried. And I hate crying when watching TV and such.
Anywayz, all ur poems have nice rhythm. i was just wondering have u ever tried one of those poems that don't rhyme? i forgot what they're called...grr...gotta check back to you on that one.