i love the analogy u used for this - tres deep

Good poem. You make good use of imagery.

So true! 'Like the moon, you too would have been invisible
If I had not been shining behind you.' That's classic. I love it!
^_^

Great concept, and the metaphorical message was totally clear. I liked it. A lot.
~Lil Lalita

I like it, the idea behind it's fresh and new, and you express it well. It's an interesting spin on the situation. Nice work.
-nix-

I like this poem. I especially think the last line is incredibley sensitive, yet forceful. Very well done.
(No need to thank me. Just dedicate your next one to me!)

Well, good job Bee. I've seen better flow, but this had a great metaphor... I liked it a lot.