Huh! On fanficrion you're practically a celebrity, but here jeez... Hasn't anybody noticed you?!!

Great poem! I liked the line "I’m just a sideways angel with a halo made of tin." And the last stanza is my favorite. Very nice!

I liked that. Great meter and rhyming and filled with that sharp wit I love about you.
A joy to read, as always.

Ah, it's very true. Yet another great poem! I can't write poems for beans, so it makes your stuff seem all the more better. ^_^

Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant, and everyone I've read it to thinks it's brilliant too! Now about that next chapter...*shuffles feet and grins*

Hmm- interesting. Seems to be based on Christian themes/ideas, but that's just how it seems to me at the moment.
Nice rhyming, beat and format- especially how you could use it to your advantage- you controlled the format, not the other way around-- eg, in the second stanza when you cut up lines.
Good choice for title- it suits it and sets up the idea.
It's an interesting idea- that the virtuous are so because they refuse/can't see evil. And even though they doin't see half the world (though then how could they improve it?), it would still be more important to you to have virtue.
Great imagery of sigh vs virtue; strong sub-images.

A Cynic indeed...unfortunately, in most cases I agree with you...virtue can indeed be smug and blind...however, a small caveat...over the span of time, for man to progress as he has, and that is quite far I propose, some of the virtuous along the way took the time to point out the evil and deal with it, otherwise we would not still be...the imperative being...we must fight evil every time it dares rear its ugly chops... excellent work..regards...amicus

I have to say I think this is really good. Being honest poetry has never been a big love of mine, but that is quickly changing.

The message you get across here is really strong, because you've used the imagery so well. It's really powerful.

Congrats, Lupa. Another great one *offers hug*

*looks on with a bewildered expression*

... I mean this in all sincerity;

WHY AREN'T YOU PUBLISHING YOUR POEMS?!

Or trying, anyway :-p I'm knowledgable enough about writing to know that rejection slips have a tendancy to pile up, even for the good writers. ;-)

*hugs* I love your poetry! It's poingnant, great rhyme & rythym and AMAZING content!