that was... interesting. That end part sounds exactly like the beginning of this movie that i saw on the family channel. is that where you got it from?

hey! wow, great story so far! :) it was hecka long and i'm supposed to be doing a lab report right now but i got too caught up in the story.. ;P I can't wait to read the next chapter to find out what tristen's gonna do! anyway, see you in the next chapter, i've got this stupid lab to finish first... X.x

Hey, this is great. Update soon.

Great story. But it's kind of confusing with the names, like which one is the girl and which one's the guy. Anyway, update soon!