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| Ashala Nightstalker 2005-04-25 ch 8,  | abuseYou could have done so much more with this to end it!! |
| Silver Shadows 2004-12-28 ch 7, anon. | abuseWhere the hell was he?! *pitches a fit* Oh, and, um, honey, guys *can* do THAT. As in they have a hole too just think of where...*smirks* Yeah, try from the behind now. So yes, guys can have sex together, you just have to know how. Just wanted to let you know. Don't feel stupid or anything. ^_^ |
| Silver Shadows 2004-12-28 ch 6, anon. | abuseWha-WHY DID HE DO THAT?! DAMNIT, I'M GOING TO HAVE AN ANUERYSM! IS IT BECAUSE HE DOESN'T NEED HIM ANYMORE OR WHAT?! *shrieks* *throws stuff* |
| Silver Shadows 2004-12-28 ch 3, anon. | abuseI was wondering when he would transform! ^_^ Although *sigh* I *did* like Morning the Cat...he was kew...but still, I knew he was going to turn into an almost human person thingy, so *shrugs* whatever...but I still like the kitty! I want one! |
| Silver Shadows 2004-12-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww! I want the kitty! I haven't read past the first chappie, but I'm already loving it! ^_^ |
| twistinside 2004-09-03 ch 8, | abuseI like the basis of the story and the characters. So cute. Have to say that sometimes the writing does leave something to be desired. And the use of chat-speak (like *grin* or lol) is really annoy. It breaks the flow of the story. All in all, I think you should find someone to go over this story and help you revise it. It would help a lot. And possibly make it easier to read. |
| r.mai 2004-07-12 ch 8, | abuseaww... that last bit was a bit hazy with the explanation. yay for the story though. it was good while it lasted. ^_^ |
| r.mai 2004-07-12 ch 7, | abuseaw ha ha... eek, freezing weather... outside in boxers. XD stupid stupid! |
| r.mai 2004-07-12 ch 6, | abuseouch. what happened? |
| r.mai 2004-07-12 ch 4, | abusewhoot lol~ time to get drunk for the first time! unless you're like some ppl i know lol. |
| r.mai 2004-07-12 ch 3, | abuseha ha ... morning the guy = cool? hope he gets well and stuff. |
| r.mai 2004-07-12 ch 2, | abuseeh? lol. strange... very strange, but interesting... lol. |
| r.mai 2004-07-12 ch 1, | abusecute cat. =P |
| whirling dervish 2004-04-19 ch 1, | abuseAw! Your story was muchly adorable ^_^ It was well-written, and the characters seemed very interesting and developed. The only thing that I could have wished for was more background info on Morning and Sebastian, but I guess that the hints to an 'enigmatic past' thing work well too...Either way, I loved the two characters that you built and would have loved to have heard more about them! Great job, and very enjoyable to read :) |
| Edana 2004-04-16 ch 8, | abuseAww, it's over! I agree with you about the always having hope. Even when everything seems very heavy and impossible (especially when, in fact) it must be so beautiful to finally find someone or something to have hope in. I think you portrayed it well - this last chapter was beautiful too. Sebastian and Morning are such a sweet and lovely couple and I loved reading about them. How they brought hope and love to each other . . . This was an interesting, intriguing and well written story and the plot and the characters drew me in straight away (obviously) and it was great. I really liked it! |