*gasp* Violence! I disAPPROVE! *claps hands to face* This is horrible. You should be arrested. The children that are reading this poem at this moment may one day become ax murderers. I'm suing. *runs off to get a lawyer, hands still at cheeks*

~C

Wow...Excellent piece! Keep writing you are very talented!

OOH! Very descriptive! I like it!

~ CoolBeans18s

Arg, matey!! ^_^ So, I really liked this poem. It makes me want to go out on the seas and be piraty.

Good Job. write on!