Hey,

Wow, I'd say this was a good story, but because of what its about I'll reword and say that it was well written and was full of emotion.

I am planning on writing a story for nanowrimo (a writing competition in november ()) this year about child abuse from a teenage males point of view. Being a girl I'm not exactly sure how to go about this. I would love any advice or tips you could give me.

I really like your style or writing and I encourage you to keep writing, I think you'd make a good author one day weather that be your goal or not.

-Steph (Word-Painting)

sweet story. i really liked the ending and how, even though it was a one chapter thing, you still had lots of detail and things going on. good job