So...this was good, I just wish you had built up more.

Aw theyre in love thats why. cant face up to their own feelings *sigh* or at least thats the tainted whimsicle and stupid idea i came up with...

moving on...i thought this story was brilliant! fanastic..wait let me get the dictionary...great! fabulous and fantablous..hehe see? so good you have to make up words...lol

well, it's till very good. even if i don't member half of it. when are you putting The Fire Lord up?

Ah nice! i can't wait to see what happens with Trahern and Iae! Write more please!

Yep, another good one! Keep it up, I'll read anything you write!

Hey girl! Haha, yeah, i luv this story. Decided to review myself.. but everyone at school liked it, so at least you have the comfort of knowing that they reviewed and liked it. Um.. why am I writing to myself? Never mind.