Astonishing, gorgeous work! Very metaphorical too, especially considering how general you kept it, sticking with "the Girl" and "the shadow." Terrifying and effective.

You have an alluring writing style, and I'd love to read your longer pieces.

A well written story inded! I really liked it! Keep up the good work!

wow, really, really, wow, i *trills* love it, lol its great how you didn't put in to much de-tail, how you left the reader space to think, but maybe, if you're board one day, could you PLEASE continue it? its such a intresting concept, "the foot prints of shadows..."yours-Strawberry Fields Forever

Ok...i loved it. It is an amazing story. Good setting out paragraph wise and the descriptions i enjoyed rather alot. The shadow men and then the footprints. This is a really good piece of writing. You wanna know how it is? It is awesome. 10/10

Quite interesting. I like your style of writing. It's well written for a short story.

i like this ive never read it before but i like it alot!

I love this story, the descriptions were excellent. I loved the element of mystery, and especially liked the ending. Great job! Short, yet sweet...

This is lovely; intriguing from the start and the ending is very nice.

Keep it up! ;D

~Ihéy the Silver

Wow. This is really cool. It had me on the edge of my seat (such as it is). I love the ending!
Thank you so much for all of your kind reviews! I would have e-mailed you thanks, but I didn't see your address anywhere. I will update "Diary" as soon as I can, but I'm mainly working on a story for fanfiction.net right now. Thank you so much! You made my morning!
-Cantora

Wow, that story sent shivers up my spine!! I could see it happening, it was very well described. Amazing story!

I loved this symbolic adventure into your character's life. It's a mindset we all need to learn. No matter how dark things get, there's always light afterwards. Very nicely written. Very surreal. One of my favorites.

That was freaky but good though.