Whe! Blatant darkness and despair! Again, the emotions in this are stunning and real and remembered. I have so many fav lines!
"Fallen a thousand times,
But never broken;"
"To lie a thousand lies,
To live a million lives,"
Heh...suddenly reminded of Takeis...XD
Know what else I admire your poetry for? You actually *use* punctuation. About 3 of my poems use anything but periods...lol...
Awesome poem...if I didn't say that already...
winged one

Hm... *humming underneath my breath* Yeah, gotta like the "remix" version better... It's got more, better flow. Still, this is a pretty good poem.

Izzy J.

This poem is very...very...me. LOL. You have a knack for expressing what I cannot. My favorite part of the poem is: 'Ensnared in darkness, killing

Me. Is this all there is?

Am I only alive to die?'

Thank you very much for reviewing my work! Lindsay (Lilliana)

Is this all there is?

Am I only alive to die?

Again and again,

Only to come alive and cry.

Those were the best lines in the entire poem! This is great! I'd put it on my fave stories list, but they won't let me list anymore...gr...They caught me on how many I had. Oh, well. Still very good!

Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame