Okay... I might convince my band to cover the song, and use these lyrics... see how many people even notice. Bloody posers.

oh billy...you've earned yourself a place on my favorite authors list...i like!

yes! i feel this...not just from you, but...mmph! so good

so so very good

*jules*

ps...shoot me, but i dont particularly care for the new stuff metallica puts out...but other than that...theyre only just good in my mind...

As you know, I'm not one of Metallica's biggest fans (though I have no problem with them or their music), but I liked this. ::claps:: You are so groovy...::bows:: I shall steal your talent when you're not looking! Hoo-ha!

Lucky

Wow, I really like this one... you captured the feel of Metallica.. and it's just an all around beautiful piece. I'm impressed. Personally, I like this part best:

I'll tear myself apart

I'll make it gone

I'll make sure it hurts no one

very good job on this one.

I like this. I can relate well. If you know the tune, you can actually sing it, too!

OK I love Metalica great band.

I really liked this poem as well I thought it was smooth how I read it.