I have to run away and write up lectures [on invertebrate biology -_- and animal physiology, joy] but I saw this one and it looked a little lonely without any reviews in the sea of others. So here I am. Loitering. *looks ashamed*
This one confused me a little, but only because my mind began interpreting it in so many different ways, and wondering which was the intended. It felt much riddlesque [note to self: stop inventing words] and the rhyme scheme worked well. You're good with rhyme.
I'm feeling all inspired now.
Dammit. If I don't get any work done tonight due to sudden urges to write, I'm holding you entirely to blame.
*scuttles away much happier*