Aw, this is such a good story! I really like it! You did a really good job in writing this!

That was wonderful! Just...wow! Very seductive and beautiful! Good job!

Wow, intense. Well written. Good story.

um...wow.

I loved it! ^ ^ Please let there be more

theres going to be more right?

that was great so whos your favorite vampire ?? mine would have to anne rices mona. in black wood farm lestat turned her for quin . she was my favorite witch from the mayfair witches so i love her even more as a vampire .again great start and i look foward to more .