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Marshmallow Vampire 2003-12-01 . chapter 1
Yes, it is sad...but beutiful(typo?) too... The images are pretty, and I liked the title. Simple is always better to get emotion accros. I like the rhyming scheme , and the briefness of the poem. Awesome job!
-Amberose(heh, yeah it's me, logged into the other account again)
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