Reviews for The Scythe Sweeps

Alexi Stone 2005-02-15 ch 1,	abuseAre you talking about rebirth here? I like the chill and unattached feeling the story seems to have.
Laksha 2004-01-22 ch 1,	abuseInspiring, beautiful, and flows quite nicely.
NailsOfNineInches 2003-09-19 ch 1,	abuseNicely written. Great job. And it's p-o-u-r-s and not pores. Just thought I'd let you know. Anyways, keep it up.
me10 2003-09-19 ch 1,	abusebrilliant flow of words. interesting poem subject.
Miamouse 2003-09-19 ch 1,	abuseBest peice of poetry advice I was ever given was 'show, don't tell' and I'll quote it to my grave. I think that maybe your poet needs a little more showing and a little less telling. However, there were some inspired lines. Also, if you have spell and grammar check then use them. Or alternatively get a realiable editor or beta reader. Mia