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| Reviews for One Last Moment |
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   mishidoll 9/19/03 . chapter 1Exquiste, beautiful, sharp. Dying, yet holding on, lingering on pain. Great job. |
| Kat's Moon Song 9/19/03 . chapter 1 Pretty. I like it, especially the line about holding on for one more breath. Very nice use of language - |
