I want a guy like Alex, he seems so genuine.

Odd question, but what sport does Jason play?

Why does Alex don't want Amber? Poor Amber. How dare her dad had date a woman after his wife died. I wonder if Jason will take care of Amber. Hurry update soon

AW! That was cute. The song titles didn't really go with the chapters but oh well.

great chapter!

exactly what is a reverse mohawk?
good chap!

great fic! i like some of avril songs too! keep writing! :)

Wow keep writing

very nice story i like it... if only i could be like amber...well i am like that but without the piercings... well can't wait for another chapter hope it's as good as the rest of em

UPDATE!... both ur journal and story :D! also come read my story, i'm gonna add my new chapter as soon as my computer chapter adding works. It's been acting funny lately. anywho, can't hang out during last few days of vacation. sowy. iz wednesday today and am doing project...alone. And then me go with erika on friday for fun. then on saturday...saturday...meh i'll see if satruday or sunday is good:D! see u then. Will phone u if I can. goobaye

yey i understand now! aww poor jason
but ya it's good but in chapter nine i foudn you just kidna ended abruptly with a simple: "what?"
ELABORATE! don't leave readers on a word! it's painful cuz then we don't know what she's going to answer! newho g2g to gala. i foudn out ti's inthe same room with the same piano so i'm a lot less stressed. i'll tell you how it goes kk. ttyl! bby

Right-o. I was debating on whether or not to review this. First off the authors notes in the middle of everything is really annoying. Plus if you want to do a scene change incorporate it into the story and start a new paragraph. This story has great potential though. I hope you keep working on it.

great chap! *waits patiently for next*

good chap...nvm about what i said...i'm a perfectionist

weird ... he fell fast :s oh well whatever at the beginning i didn't get this and now i do hehe so nice job