This is really good but what happened to your ryming scheme in the last verse?

Another great poem. You write very good you should keep it up;)

nice poem, like the symbolism of the glass!

nice poem, like the symbolism of the glass!

Another great poem. I must admit I think I like Dry Ice better, but this one's still good. Keep it up, okay?
^_^

Very pretty.

I must say, I did enjoy that quite a bit. Very nice comparison and use of words. I liked it a lot. You forgot to put an h before the c in aches at the very end, but besides that, it was very beautiful.

Thank you for the wonderful read,

Ciao. ^_~