Hehe- well said. Steady beat and rhyming.
The first stanza makes a good point. I don't know if it was jsut for the rhyming- but saying they're lazy is very insightful-- they're too lazy to look deeper or think harder etc.
'The ultimat freedom of life'- nice:)
'Won't you wear/ you soul' strong idea in theory, but it's very hard, and it leaves you vulnerable... although you always be working to improve your soul then.
Last 2 lines are a treasure- well said:D

You have depth in most, if not all your poems.
The last two lines seem to me a bit cliche-ed after seeing T-shirts or so with the similar "slogan" but it goes well with the rest of the poem. I like your phrasing.

-Izzy J.

WOW! EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT... I HONESTLY CANNOT SAY ENOUGH TO EXPRESS HOW MUCH I ENJOYED THE DEPTH OF YOUR WORDS...YOUR POETRY HAS A SOUL NOT JUST A BODY THAT TO ME IS WHAT REAL POETRY IS ALL ABOUT...I ENCOURAGE YOU TO CONTINUE WITH YOUR WRITING... YOU CAN BE A GREAT POET! I MAKE SURE TO BUY YOUR WORK... :)

OOh. OOh, ooh, OOH!! Oh, the last lines especially are Brilliant!! (With a capitol B.)

Laura, this is awesome.

...WHOO!! *Applause*

Dear Laura-
I particurly likes the first and last paragraphs of this piece-
Excellent write!
Best
Wishes~
James