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Reviews For: Falling Melodies
Suicidal Skies
2005-05-08
ch 1, 		abuseLovely.
silverdream139
2003-11-15
ch 1, 		abuseSweet, light ending. This line particularly caught my eye:

"The world I once knew
Is now and impressionist
Masterpiece"

Interesting inagery of rain. A very soothing mood about this, also. Nice work.

~Ja
-Terra
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