How true some temptations are? You feel the pulse to move towards them and then you realize in the end all you got for a reward was pain. Beautiful alluring and quite relatable piece to begin with. I enjoyed it. bravo.

Yay!!This is so cool! I love the whole mystery that surrounds this poem, the feeling that you, as the reader, are about to delve into the essence of some deep dark secret, as smooth as chocolate, as velvet-softness as the rain...ok, I'm getting freaky-poetic-ish again. TT Wonderful, fabulous work.

~Ari

oh wow... I love the angsty flavor. you're always so descriptive with your poems; gives a very surreal feeling. always love your work. keep it up!

OOh LA LA!
Very good. I have always adored your poems. =)
Keep it up!

@.@ too many vocab words!
I just learned those words like a week ago, my brain hurts now...

Great poem! but not as good as me ^~ (jk)

Whoa ho ho!! Like at the professional here. I like this! Lot's of great figurative language. Excellent job.

o philosophical tree ^^" A very interesting short poem I'm glad i was able to catch. Impulses lead to pain...let's all remember that.