I really would like to see you add more to this. I agree with the others, very interesting. *Strokes Long Gray Beard* Well, I think that you could paint a better picture, better word choice, maybe? I don't know. Whatever you want to, as long as you are happy with your story. Write On!

I agree: Interesting. But you could put a little more content into that review, TCotPP (long name). Anyways, interesting prelude. Is this the same person who has the pyrokinetic powers? I'm guessing no. Like I said in the story, looks to be good...

KEEP WRITING!

-CI

Interesting.