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| just.because.lemonade.stand 2008-01-25 ch 1,  | abusewow. i loved this. it was so good! |
| arachibutyrophobia 2005-01-31 ch 1, | abuseOh this is so sad...Poor Dallas and everyone who will feel the guilt. So sad, especially because it happens all the time, and that overcoming such abuse has been and always will be a large issue. Great work!~birdytamel~ |
| Mettie 2004-10-19 ch 1, | abuseOh my goodness. How tragic. I feel worst for poor Dallas. To think, he probably blames himself. Excellently written. I love the refrains. Keep up the great work and God Bless! ~*Mettie*~ |
| SleepDontWeep 2004-08-10 ch 1, | abusewhoa HEAVY! that was amazingly written u shud b PROUD! her little brother added a touch of major sadness to it! love ya xx iv got sum new chapters up pleaz check dem out! |
| Not so Average 2004-07-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is incredible. I love the ending, I never saw that coming and the way you wrote it gave just enough without being too vague or too boring. The reactions, emotions, and dialogues were all real. Incredible. |
| Queen Niamh 2004-06-18 ch 1, | abusewow. . . this was really really good. i love how you put the song into the story and made it work. very, very good job. keep up the good work and thanks for the review :) |
| ZiggyGurl 2004-04-22 ch 1, | abuseThis was a really good story. It was short and sweet and to the point and I liked the song incorporated in it. This was a great story. Thank you for reviewing mine! It really means a lot! |
| Tuesdae 2004-04-03 ch 1, | abuseWow. Wow. That was great. |
| freedman121 2004-03-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was really, really good. I like how the song was really incorperated into the piece. It made a lot of sense to me especially, because I've heard the song multiple times... Freedman |
| dragonboy3611 2004-03-29 ch 1, | abuseIt was a really good peice of work, I really liked it. Keep on writing. |
| keep.breathing 2004-03-28 ch 1, | abusewow. . . abuse sucks. a lot. but this story was awesome. i loved how you used the song to match up with what happened in the story. so well written and powerful. keep up the good work and thanks for the reviews :) |
| horseriding-muso 2004-02-22 ch 1, | abuseHoly **! |
| FAKE?romances 2004-02-19 ch 1, | abuseoh. that was so sad. and yet so poignant...and deep...and good...one of the best songfics i've ever read =) |
| Roses-r-red 2003-09-19 ch 1, | abuseHey I love the story it's great the way you worked the song in it & it was a great choice of a song. Keep it up! ;) ~Dani |
| t h e m u s h r o o m 2003-09-19 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE IT! AND I LOVE HOW YOU CORPERATED "Never Again" into it. ABSOLUTLY GREAT!@! Dillon |