Hey, what are the phrases in between the statements? Is it a song, or a poem, or just a metafictional device? Anyway, it was good. Abuse is a horrid thing, and it always makes me want to go out and kill a man myself. But a woman killing her husband is nothing new. I just wish they could leave before it comes to that...

wow. i loved this. it was so good!

Oh this is so sad...Poor Dallas and everyone who will feel the guilt. So sad, especially because it happens all the time, and that overcoming such abuse has been and always will be a large issue. Great work!~birdytamel~

Oh my goodness. How tragic. I feel worst for poor Dallas. To think, he probably blames himself. Excellently written. I love the refrains. Keep up the great work and God Bless! ~*Mettie*~

whoa HEAVY! that was amazingly written u shud b PROUD! her little brother added a touch of major sadness to it! love ya xx iv got sum new chapters up pleaz check dem out!

This is incredible. I love the ending, I never saw that coming and the way you wrote it gave just enough without being too vague or too boring. The reactions, emotions, and dialogues were all real. Incredible.

wow. . . this was really really good. i love how you put the song into the story and made it work. very, very good job. keep up the good work and thanks for the review :)

This was a really good story. It was short and sweet and to the point and I liked the song incorporated in it. This was a great story. Thank you for reviewing mine! It really means a lot!

Wow. Wow. That was great.

That was really, really good. I like how the song was really incorperated into the piece. It made a lot of sense to me especially, because I've heard the song multiple times...
Freedman

It was a really good peice of work, I really liked it. Keep on writing.

wow. . . abuse sucks. a lot. but this story was awesome. i loved how you used the song to match up with what happened in the story. so well written and powerful. keep up the good work and thanks for the reviews :)

Holy **!

oh.
that was so sad. and yet so poignant...and deep...and good...one of the best songfics i've ever read =)

Hey I love the story it's great the way you worked the song in it & it was a great choice of a song. Keep it up! ;)
~Dani