This is one of my favourites so far. I wish I could write this well! You are a true poet, dearie, and this is another brilliant one. No words can do it justice-- it's just incredible.
Don't ever stop writing, whatever you do, because your words are just stunning. It is all just stunning. Wow. Wow! I adore this.
I don't believe I have seen an image created by a poem or story as vividly as I have done with this. Your words really do describe the imagined land of thoughts, and memories. I wish I could give a more coherent review, but I am honestly lost for words!
Your work is both honest and true. You have an amazing gift, and it is coming out clearly in these poems. Again, I can only say-- wow.

I LOVED IT! BEAUTIFUL USE OF LANGUAGE AND IMAGERY... VERY VERY NICELY WRITTEN...CONVEYS EMOTION AND DEEP MEANING... EXCELLENT!

OOh, clever. ;) I love it. Very descriptive.

*Applause, once again* Wonderful work, dear.