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Lady_D 2003-09-21 . chapter 1
Very pretty, I love your style of writing.
NailsOfNineInches 2003-09-20 . chapter 1
Decently written. Not the best work in the world, but if you had spent a bit more time with it I bet that you'd have one killer poem. Good job; keep it up.
Lucy Ricardo 2003-09-20 . chapter 1
That's good. I liked it. Keep it up.
Miamouse 2003-09-20 . chapter 1
Yes, poems DO need summaries, otherwise how would we know which ones we want to read?

I like the concept of this... I think that it could flow better, the rhyme sometimes makes it a little choppy. But good content.

Mia
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