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Reviews For: The Greed Eyed Monster

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
2003-10-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseO. Interesting
ID
2003-10-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou've emphasised the repetitiveness of your boy's life through all the 'predictions' he makes of his future, but it doesn't seem to have enough description of his living or working conditions, type of food he ate. Yes, he works in a factory, with many other immigrants and their children, but it lacks detail for a history task.
However, it is sad.
unika
2003-09-29
ch 1,
abuseBO YOU SUCK YOU PEICE OF CRAP! no, jk. Kool story :)
Baby Milo
2003-09-22
ch 1,
abuseThat's sad, but very good. Well written and intriguing. Keep up the good work!
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