Wonderful poem.

Well written.

Twilight Starr

This is great. It reminds me of T.S. Elliot's style of writing. Sort of like building up to the titles name. "And thats how the world ends.. Not with a bang.. but with a whimper.." Hah! Isn't it wonderful? I see so much potential in your poetry and your fiction. Congrats on all your hard work.

I love your poetry. You have inspired me. I know what that feels like...rejection. I still love someone, but unfortunately the love is not shared. I only wish I could express my pain as you do.

beautiful. your use of questions and and the second person realyl drew the reader (me) in. your language was lovely, it was a beautiful poem...

i feel like something has happened that caused you to write this... and i might just be stupid...

but yeah... i love it, just as w/all the rest of your work. i guess that's all i can say...

-mandaZ

I love this poem it is so touching...AAR ROX...thanx for the review im 14 too. I think ur really talented

that was really hear touching poem... i thought it was good... :) :) plz R/R mine too :) :)