Very well done, I loved it, must re-read *re-reads* awesome, very well done, keep up the great work

There is still the same problem though... capitals!.. use them, they really do make a poem look much more formal and plesant to the eye... plus no capitals is usually a sign of amature-ism and some readers might turn away upon seeing it... just a thought, you don't have to listen if you don't want to

A rather "cold" poem, especially because the stars are portrayed as frosty, unromantic objects. Very good idea!

sorry jessangel...this will sound bitchy, but i actually meant a specific person when i dedicated it. but i guess it could mean anyone. :) thanks for reviewing anyways.
ELise

This reminded me of a poem I just wrote recently, especially the beginning of this poem... it's called Forgotten, if you're curious.

But this was excellent. So much power behind the words, I loved it. Great job, definitely one of your better ones yet.

That was lovely...aww and dedicated to us readers. Wonderful work.

"stars singular and all the same
my thoughts of your are countless
winking through my mind"

Genius lines. Le sigh. I like. Keep writing!

Jess 0:o)

aw i like this! the language in particular is awesome. i mean it's like the words in and of themselves keep you on the edge of a frosted razor blade as you read, 'tis quite an original feeling. :P lots and lots of awesome imagery. good rhythm. my favorite lines from this would have to include "stars twinkle like the greed in their eyes/a million frozen ideas adn prayers," "terrorize my fear" (what a unique and awesome concept!), and "my thoughts of you are countless." very nice piece, chica. :)

This is breathtaking! Warm, and yet, so cold... I loved it. Brilliant. Amazing. Wonderful *grabs thesaurus*

~ CoolBeans18s

This is one of your best poems ever. Oh, it was just gorgeous. I had to read it again, it was that good. The last two lines were particularly breathtaking. I'm glad you haven't let your personal restraints stop you from being a poetic genius.