A bit better, still sad, but better.

If he doesn't find you in time, then perhaps he isn't worth waiting for.

Thank you for reviewing my poem, I have others, so feel free to browse.

God Bless

-darqlyte

interesting, well-written, and although not your best, the ending is great.

Aw, that's a really good poem. And I Know the feeling. I would like to say, good use of the word "whom;" people rarely use that word these days, but I love the word "whom" and you're awesome for using the word "whom." Ha Ha...anywho, very, very good poem.

wow that was great keep writing!