|Reviews for Desolate|
| darqlyte 10/10/05 . chapter 1
A bit better, still sad, but better.
If he doesn't find you in time, then perhaps he isn't worth waiting for.
Thank you for reviewing my poem, I have others, so feel free to browse.
| myno 1/8/05 . chapter 1
interesting, well-written, and although not your best, the ending is great.
| Thomas Morrow 7/10/04 . chapter 1
Aw, that's a really good poem. And I Know the feeling. I would like to say, good use of the word "whom;" people rarely use that word these days, but I love the word "whom" and you're awesome for using the word "whom." Ha Ha...anywho, very, very good poem.
| thaiswirl 9/21/03 . chapter 1
wow that was great keep writing!