'Tis a sad thing, when the one you love, or think you love, loves another. This one conveys the emotion well, it makes you feel for this person. Your poetry is rather gothic, though I supose that is the intention.

God Bless

-darqlyte

beautiful. you use just enough words to get the point across. great job

Wow, that's a powerful image. I can't explain, but it just brings this picture to my mind and it's beautiful.

this is kinda cool. It's true, sometimes when you cry in the rain, you're glad whoevers around you can't tell your crying...

very sad, but beautiful as well. the last five lines i like ,arabian knight

That is truly awesome. Woah... Great ending. I can relate, I know the feeling, and there's so much in this poem that you only touch on, leaving the reader to think about it all... An excellent piece of writing.

I like this poem alot! its very good, you are very talented.

hey..thanks for the review and the correction..really helps..this is great very very simple and realistic, but the message is deeper than it looks...great job...-LUV YAH-

Simple and quite straight to the point, but the images conceived were, while a common theme among writers, a touch intimate. It's personal and it touched a nerve at my end.

Wow! I love this! This is extremely excellent poetry. Keep on writing!

Absolutely gorgeous. I love the subject matter :)

You have such a gift for spinning threads of words and yards of silk poetry. *sniffle* BFP

It's short, but really sweet... almost made me cry, actually.. amazing the memories that poems can drudge up, knowing that someone else has felt the same thing.. the short lines work really well,.. and there seems to be a slight rhyming at the end, which i can't see where it is, but it's wonderful... fantastic piece, well done!
Day2Dreamer

Cute. Very much so. I've read a few poems but very few like this. Very few which actually hit me...beautiful.

Aw *sniffles* short but cute, very heart warming yet sad.

*Jenna*